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Sometimes I Wonder by =Lilith-Elina:iconLilith-Elina:

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Sometimes I wonder...
what have I done to myself when I built my walls?

One for the demon,
the form of a hut,
to keep us all safe.

One round my heart
to protect it from damage,
the stupid soft thing.



Sometimes I wonder...
have I always been like this?

When the demon is out
I feel anger and passion,
rage and all that.

But when I am myself
I can only reflect
what others express.



Sometimes I wonder...
am I only a mirror with no feelings at all?

I rarely feel empty,
when I am by myself
I don't miss a thing.

But when there are others
I am only an actor,
acting like I feel the same.



Sometimes I wonder...
do I have feelings at all?
©2009-2010 =Lilith-Elina
:iconlilith-elina:

Author's Comments

I'm not sure whether or not I mentioned that the Builder started to write in the final version of The Demon Within. But he did, and here I present one of his works, a rather bad poem. :D

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~Venus-Majare May 13, 2009, 3:21:55 AM
its not to bad

--
Don’t be sad for every Rose has its Thorn
Rejoice for every Thorn has its Rose

I'm more afraid of life then I am of death.
but fear can be the best part of life
like the fear of your first kiss, first love
or just first as a whole
so fear, love and live
:iconlilith-elina:
=Lilith-Elina May 13, 2009, 7:38:28 AM
Thanks! :hug:

--
We're the people, the happy with the broken hearts,
The ones who draw a picture and proclaim that it's art.
(Johnossi)

Betray your heart with logic
:iconmondsplitter:
~Mondsplitter May 14, 2009, 5:10:26 AM
I don't even care if this is a poem. I like it and I don't. Something is good about it and something isn't.

That's why I had to think about a :+fav:. It's probably good because it is from you. :)

--
Be yourself. Only better.
:iconlilith-elina:
=Lilith-Elina May 14, 2009, 10:10:23 AM
You don't have to fav anything you don't really like...

--
We're the people, the happy with the broken hearts,
The ones who draw a picture and proclaim that it's art.
(Johnossi)

Betray your heart with logic
:iconmondsplitter:
~Mondsplitter May 14, 2009, 11:17:57 AM
But I do like it. :) I just can't say why.

--
Be yourself. Only better.
:iconvenus-majare:
~Venus-Majare May 15, 2009, 7:30:42 AM
welcome

--
Don’t be sad for every Rose has its Thorn
Rejoice for every Thorn has its Rose

I'm more afraid of life then I am of death.
but fear can be the best part of life
like the fear of your first kiss, first love
or just first as a whole
so fear, love and live
:icons-da:
~s-da Jun 9, 2009, 8:23:42 AM
I like it too. It reminds me of the children I work with. Or rather, the way others may see them. And the answer I'd give is - yeah, you have feelings, that's why you built those walls.
:+fav:

--
Magic of nature :butterflytwo: [link] and music :music: [link]
:iconlilith-elina:
=Lilith-Elina Jun 9, 2009, 8:03:12 PM
What kind of children do you work with?

Thanks for the fav! :)

--
We're the people, the happy with the broken hearts,
The ones who draw a picture and proclaim that it's art.
(Johnossi)

Betray your heart with logic
:icons-da:
~s-da Jun 11, 2009, 8:42:28 AM
autistic children or in general children with psychological difficulties :aww:

--
Magic of nature :butterflytwo: [link] and music :music: [link]
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